Thanks :D
September 15th, 2009 at 02:32pm
Haha, cool. x]
That was short and simple, yet the message was delivered clearly. Loved the beginning, by the way. ^^ I also really like how he pushed her out of the car's way and saved her life like that. There weren't too many grammar, spelling or punctuation mistakes, either. Paragraphing was good, too.
All in all, good job. :D