When The Trust Is Gone - Comments

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! honestly i could read it all day! i can't wait for more. soo please hurry with a new chapter! =/ joe is an ass. i think he really loves her but he doesnt know how to stop cheating. i really want him to keep his promise, but at the same time i would love for her to go to LA with david and joe to realize what he is doing.

I love this story. I've been waiting for an update to this forever.
Please update soon :)

P.s. Sorry about your loss.

I loved the update. I really hope Joe can keep his promise, I think he will though!
I am so sorry to hear about the car crash. That's horrible.
I can't wait for the next update

I've missed this story.
It was really good, and sad.
I can't wait for more :]

Loved the update! Amazing, like usual. :) Man, this story just keeps getting better and better, I don't know how you do it. I don't mind for having to wait so long, either, I'm just glad that you finally updated! :) Aw, and I love that Joe's being a little more sweet to her now, after she finally told him what was bothering her. Well, part of what was. But I thought it was a little out of line for him yelling at her for having David there; he's allowed to go out wherever he wants with whoever he wants, but she's not? That's... ignorant of him. :( I'm sorry that you've been reported, why would anyone report you? You have amazing stories. Maybe someone's just jealous... ;P I read the one article on that boy that you knew. It's a terrible thing that happened to him. :( I will keep his father, as well as him and his brother, in my prayers. :) Hopefully his father is able to get through it; it's a tough thing to go through, so hopefully he's able to stay strong. :)
Sorry for the long comment. I tend to type a lot, and I also wanted to tell you my thoughts. :) Again, amazing update, and can't wait for the next chapter! :D

can you update this story please!! i keep re-reading what you have and i just love it even more. Joe is an ass and i wanna see him realize what he's losing!!! more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i love this story so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love that joe is an ass and i love that she cant help but love him. i think that you should do something that will make him jealous. like have him see her out or something happen with another guy, not like have her cheat on him, but something that gives joe a taste of his own medicine in a way or something that makes him realize that he could lose her and what exactly he is losing. haha i read this and all i could think about was tiger woods..joe jonas is the tiger woods of this story!!! update soon please!

This story is so tragic and beautiful.
No one was even physically hurt, its all emotional pain.
You never fail to amaze me love.

Pee.ess. Joe is a douche bag.

really love this, please update soon

this was amazing
i am glad she's starting to come down into reality and realize everything wasn't all a dream and isn't going to go away when she wakes up(:
please update this soon.

FYI - I'll NEVER stop reading this .
Amazing chapter ! [ =

Loved the update! Aw, when is she going to leave him? I feel bad that she has to go through this, and I just want her to leave him already. Joe doesn't deserve her; she's too good for him. :) Glad you finally updated this. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

All i have to say is Joe's a total dipshit.
Rootin for David.

Cant wait for another update :) x

So I must say I love Joe but, yes, he is being a douche. I am with David on this one. They just seem to connect better than Loni and Joe. David just see's her for her, and he doesn't seem like he would cheat. As for Joe from the chapters so far, it's like all he wants is sex? but that's just from my preference. But it does seem like they love each-other in a way also. He's not always a jerk just.. once in a while. I like this story a lot(: It's interesting and quite new... usually it's some guy thats bad then a Jonas brother that's always the charmer(; lol.

love it. joe's being a little douche. lol

Aw, I loved that update. It was a little happier, since she was with David. I'll admit that I'm starting to like him now that you put him in this story. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

oooh
I can't believe I am going to type this...but David would be better for her then Joe and maybe she can cheat on Joe for David? idk if you want any ideas but here's mine :)
fantastic update <3

I'm not even a david fan and i think she should be with him!
He treats her better/ <3
But then again she loves Joe and deep down he loves her, so... maybe they could work it out
i wonder what the song idea was? Do we get to find out?
xx

im not gonna lie...right now I totally want her to be with David just because he is so much sweeter than Joe is. That update was really really good.
hope you can update soon.