very good (: i love how you used what i gave you. and i love how you didnt get detailed in the whole sex thing. i was really hoping that wouldnt happen.
I love how you descrived the kids too, even the girl. She was still a kid to me in a way. I really felt her pain and i know if that were me i wouldnt be strong enought to do anything like that.
Amazing, though - you have a
way with words, girl (:
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