The Suicide Pact - Comments

  • BigGiganticBlueSheep

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    awesomeness. :)
    April 26th, 2010 at 02:47am
  • callisto

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    wow, this is great! please keep writing more of this! this was like... whoah.
    it was chilling (in a good way) just as everyone said. And the title is really
    catching, so i just HAD to click on this!
    April 26th, 2010 at 02:08am
  • oxycontin

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    I would quote what the mentalist just said about never saying something aloud to myself when reading a story, but I don't know if that'll work on comments now and I'm scared shitless of looking like a complete tool by copying the codes from the boards and doing it here.

    BUT HOLY FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF- HOLY SHIT.
    I've never and I mean, fucking never felt so intrigued by a story before. Even in the memoirs by A.B. that you've gotten me into, this is just... *makes that weird "whew" sound but more whistely*
    I love how the concept of one girl being destined to die by a disease and then having such caring friends to do the same. Caring as in they wouldn't want to live without her, staying to their friendship... not the whole "omglikeimgonnatotallygoandkillmyselfnao" type of thing. It makes me wish I had better friends. XD
    And I might've said this before, but your writing style's amazing. I can see some sarcasm (which is definitely you. -_-) twisted into it, but it still manages to keep my jaw dropping without rolling my eyes at the same time.

    You promised me you'd update, so I better see one soon. ily and keep up.
    April 26th, 2010 at 12:01am
  • ruthann

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    I actually never say something aloud to myself when reading a story.

    That is, until now. I just finished reading the second chapter and just went. "This sounds awesome," really loudly. I'm surprised my parents didn't hear me from the next room. Or they did and thought they'd just 'leave crazy to herself.' Whatever. Anyway, THIS DOES SOUND AWESOME. So, you better continue or i'll kill you. No, I won't kill you. But I will be sad if you don't update soon. Haha.

    No, seriously. I'll just kill you.


    Kidding.
    March 13th, 2010 at 08:00pm
  • nearly witches;

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    1. I'm sorry this took me so long to comment.
    2. Wow.

    Usually I can't stand cancer stories -- cancer can't be mentioned, like, at all or I get sick, manly because I fine it a tad cliche, even if that sounds sort of harsh. But I love love loved this; you started it so perfectly that I really couldn't stop.
    One thing:
    I did the ladder, and I shouldn't have.
    I'm pretty sure it's latter.
    But otherwise, this is perfect, &I actually plan on reading more.
    November 15th, 2009 at 10:27pm
  • misguided ghost;;

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    dedicated friends or what!?
    really good.
    update soon (;
    September 18th, 2009 at 05:51pm
  • BigGiganticBlueSheep

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    What interesting friends she has.
    September 17th, 2009 at 05:56am
  • misguided ghost;;

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    Whoa.
    This is so good ^^
    I really want to know what happens next!
    Update soon (y)
    Subscribed ;D
    September 15th, 2009 at 07:27am
  • akasagarbha

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    You know, you write some of the most beautifully chilling stories I've ever read, and this is no different.

    I love this, to be frank, and I'm curious as to what's going to be happening next. Why the title is such, who Janice will commit suicide with, et cetera. So many questions are running through my head, and I'm very much enjoying them.

    The ending? That's the most bonechilling of all. It's short, yes, but just... asking for a fantastic follow-up.

    :arms: You did a great job, Erin.
    September 15th, 2009 at 05:30am