wow, thanks for pointing it out. didn't notice it at all :P
September 17th, 2009 at 12:23pm
Hey.
You had me wanting to cry with the Prequel and the Sequel =D that's a very good thing.
I noticed that you miss-used some words.
Instead of "faithful" use "fateful" so the readers can understand that something happened on that day that the girl didn't want happening.
And you put "pass week" were you meaning to put "past" instead, and you doubled the "s" by accident?
Also when you said "his gone" that doesn't sound right reading it so I'd try using the word "he's".
Other than those 3 minor things I really loved it ^_^.