Passerby - Comments

Wow, this was... I don't even know how to describe it. It left me wanting more and I just loved it.
You are a wonderful writer and the ending just blew me away.
This was amazing.

I meet her gaze, and remember how I had always wished my eyes could be midnight blue like hers, that my irises could absorb the colors of the evening sky and the shine of the stars.

I LOVE THAT LINE. SO MUCH, I HAD TO PUT IT IN ALL CAPS. SERIOUSLY.

But in all honesty, I'm speechless. In the good way course. This was amazing, for such a sort little thing. The last line got me too, because I thought he was talking about a fellow mourner, but he was talking about the corpse. Amazing!

That was beautiful, Luna.

:arms:.

I loved it.

It was really, REALLY well written.

You have talent, my friend. Love you mucho.

^ You hit the nail on the head.
Wonderful.
Sad.
Lovely.
Romantic.
And so much more.

I can't even put into words how beautifully sad I thought this was.