December 3rd, 2010 at 11:05pm
I meet her gaze, and remember how I had always wished my eyes could be midnight blue like hers, that my irises could absorb the colors of the evening sky and the shine of the stars.
I LOVE THAT LINE. SO MUCH, I HAD TO PUT IT IN ALL CAPS. SERIOUSLY.
But in all honesty, I'm speechless. In the good way course. This was amazing, for such a sort little thing. The last line got me too, because I thought he was talking about a fellow mourner, but he was talking about the corpse. Amazing!
You are a wonderful writer and the ending just blew me away.
This was amazing.