This story was well-written, I liked how in the second chapter you made everything really descriptive; I was picturing the scene as you wrote it. Also you made it quite sappy, but a good kind of sappy. :) You had a few grammar/spelling mistakes, though, and it might help if you read over it. Other than that, a really good two-shot.
This is probably one of the cutest things that I have ever read :)
You're an amazing writer with tons of talent. :)