Hello Beautiful - Comments

AWWWHH :)
This is probably one of the cutest things that I have ever read :)
You're an amazing writer with tons of talent. :)

Awe! That was so sweet. I loved it!

This story was well-written, I liked how in the second chapter you made everything really descriptive; I was picturing the scene as you wrote it. Also you made it quite sappy, but a good kind of sappy. :)
You had a few grammar/spelling mistakes, though, and it might help if you read over it. Other than that, a really good two-shot.

Rating: 8.

I love it, and considering so far your the only two shot entry you won. But, someone else may win although I highly doubt someone can too this.

Great job

I NEED PART 2 NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!?!? I love this already!! :)

How has no one commented this yet ?
GO GO GO . I LOVE IT ALREADY .