Star Crossed Lovers - Comments

bItTeRsWeEtNeSs (100)

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eh, yeah no offense but it could be a little more exciting. i mean, i no its still the beginning of the story and everything, but atleast b a little more descriptive or have something happen other than her going thru her classes.
again, no offense im not trying 2 b mean. just getting a point across

September 30th, 2009 at 03:43am

show me love (100)

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that first paragraph totally sounds like me haha.
love it.

September 28th, 2009 at 09:29pm

Smitten.In.Mittens. (100)

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Holy Jesus In And A Bag Of Chips!

Sounds like it's gonna be a good one!

It's been getting harder and harder to find good stories on here so I'm excited to see where this is going.

Plus I'm really hYpEr right now.... I had two packs of Zappin' Apple Sour Punch Straws, a Cookies 'n' Cream Hershey's bar, AND a Full Throttle Blue Demon. And two full glasses of Pepsi....

BRING ON THE NEXT ALL NIGHTER!!!!

LOVE THE STORY.

LATTAH!

September 19th, 2009 at 05:37am

a walking travesty; (100)

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I'm really intrigued to see where this is going :]
Update!

September 17th, 2009 at 11:54pm

carkeez11 (100)

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i really like it! :D
i love the picture of joe and her.
the photoshopped work is AMAZING.

September 17th, 2009 at 10:19pm

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i love this

September 17th, 2009 at 01:24am