Dirty Little Secrets - Comments

Awww!
Bubbly sex ;P
Thanks for writing such an awesome story!
I loved this from the beginning until the end!
I can't wait to read the sequel =D

I can easily say that this is one of the best All Time Low slash stories I've read on here.
You made it so believable, when, lets be honest, we all know this could never happen.
It was really fun to read and I loved every update.
I'm excited for the sequel. (:

I LOVED IT!
I can't wait for the sequel, and you did a really good job. ;]

Ohh, for the children thing, maybe someone from their past? I mean, you know how people always make Alex out to have one night stands, maybe he could have gotten a girl pregnant... some years later when he's with (whoever you choose) the girl just leaves the child with them?

I don't know, I do know I'll love it either way.

WOOHOO! BOTH a sequel and a (possible) other story?!? :D
YOU ROCK! x]
A few spelling mistakes here and there - stuff like "Alex" spelt as "Alec" xD - just proofread and you'll be fine. :] I don't care what pairing it is, hahahahaha. x]

Mm, adoptions are a tad cliche (but if it's written well, cliches are never a bad thing anyway), but M-preg is just... slightly disturbing, I'm sorry. D: And you might have to do a bit of research (because M-preg is proven to actually work now, in case anyone hasn't noticed... you need a woman's egg and some surgery, but guys can keep babies in their stomachs).

Stories for which you have to do research are fun to write for some, but I feel that they always get too technical. I can't really explain it, but yeah. It's like... hard to relate to, somewhat hard to understand, and not enough emotion. Something like that. Besides, even writing about normal pregnancy would be tough if you've never been pregnant (with all the doctor stuff and what not...).

It's always best to write stuff you know better about. I mean, reading stories can give you just about enough to write NC-17 scenes (without you having to experience sex; what more gay sex xD), but just how many involve pregnancy? If you haven't read stories about pregnancy (male or female) either, chances of it turning out well aren't very high...

Hmm, well, it's still up to you. I'd probably read whatever you dish out to us anyway, so yeah. xD

MPREG! Adoption seems a bit... uneventful :/ choosing a kid then rasising it hmm. Alex and Zack Slash OoOoOoO Rian and Zack slash would be cool just sayin' -shifty- I mean if you watch the making of/behind the scenes of Damned If I Do Ya Damned If I Don't; Rian goes to check if Zack is alright then Alex goes and breaks a mug on Rian's head and Rian droop's one of his arms on top of Zack a lil somethin' somethin' their going on in secret *cough* a Bromance *cough* yeah can't wait for the Seqeul xD

That was an amazing ending! I loved it :D
I am definitely reading the sequel!

awww! perfect ending :)
i can't wait to read the sequel

awh that was cute.
Can't wait for the sequel.
make them adopt... mpreg freakes me out O_O

NO NO NO NO MPREG PLEASE NO NO NO NO! D:

WRITE A SEQUEL ANYTHING BUT MPREG THOUGH *eyetwitch*

sweet jesus that was hot.
thank you for this story.
loved it very muchly.
hope there's a sequel,
ox.

ahh, that was an amazing ending!
i loved it, and really hope you write a sequel!

Oh My god! Finally!

Finally. Jack told him how he feels. I'm happy for Alex - he doesn't have to be crushed now, has he? =D
And I'm sad that this story is just about to be finished. But luckily you'll write a sequel. =)
♥

Eeeeeeehh!
I cannot belive it'll soon be the end. D:
I love this story<3

*squeals*
awwww
he said he loved him

Awwwwwww so cute! and a sequel! Im excited!

omg i love this story! i can't wait for a sequel...i was so happy and excited when i heard you're making one

I swore to myself I'd comment before this is over, so here I am.
I love it.

I would've commented earlier, but my stupid phone browser doesn't like the quick reply boxes for some reason.
I can't wait for the update.
:D

AHHH omg love it, UPDATES SISTA xoxox

Haha! When Jack said he didn't like Alex, I totally expected him to say he loved him. ;]

Update the last chapter soon! THEN START A SEQUEL / NEW STORY!

Teehee. x]