Detachment - Comments

WOW. That is really all I have to say.... oh and I would like to say that it was brilliant, awesome, beautiful, perfect and really good! And that the way you wrote is...it's something I've never seen before and I have no idea how you managed to make me feel vunerable and angry and sad and confused and lost while reading it. The lack of descriptions and dialouge fit perfectly and lastly I just want to say that I loved loved loved it! :D

I really liked this.
It was very different from what I usually see.
The lack of dialogue really added to the angry feeling of the story.
I'll let you know if you win!!