The emotion you admit with each and every one of these is just pure bliss – it's just wonderful how when you [the character] is really terrified of being up the tree even though Ryan is there to keep her safe, I'm terrified too; I don't even have a fear of heights like that!
It upsets me the way you show how she's missing Ryan being in Panic! At The Disco – it's hard now that the three are broken in half but they'll get through it, right? It's a shame though, it really is...
I like how blunt you are with the fact you and Ryan [they?] had sex on thesofa couch and in the bed – it shows how they [you?] don't care about what others, including Brendon think.
The last paragraph tugged at my heart – it's so sad that they weren't out on tour with him...
I love how you make the term "fucking" so beautiful!
And the concept was amazing.
You got some mad skillz, there.