March 1st, 2013 at 01:51am
comment swap c:
So I really loved the first chapter I thought it was humourous the way the mum reacted to the phasing. There's really nothing I feel I need to commet on like spelling because it was fine. I'm not totally a fan of twilight/ jacob black fanfics but I'm glad I read this, because it's really good. (:
I used to read A LOT of Twilight/Jacob Black fan fictions before. Come on. That kid is unbelievable. But I stopped when I grew out of my Twilight phase. BUT, this story is well written and I really enjoyed it and its humor! Very nice(: