Give It to Me - Comments

I don't know how I missed this, but the premise is really funny. And it was super adorable!

Awwe! That was cute. C:

OH MY FUCKING AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEE

this was cute((:

Im a bit speachless...

DAWWWW! at the ending. How cuuuuute! Also, hot.
I knew this chapter would not be safe for work. xD Glad I didn't read it there. Bummed it's finished, but it ended well. :D

Alex and Martin are having a ‘leap frog competition’ in their room.

XD
THAT'S AWESOME!

“Thanks!” Zack shouts, interrupting whoever he was conversing with.

XD
Eager much?

“It means…that I did it? I went a whole week without sex?”

“Yes; that’s exactly what it means.”

“That’s why you were avoiding me all night?”

“Yep.”

*laughs*
sneaky bastard!
:P

“So, can I fuck you now, or do I have to wait another week?”

Blunt much?

“But baby, this is just payback for how badly you teased me the past week,” Jack says, pouting. “And besides, I wanna make this last.”

*laughs then awes*
//.^

With slow, deliberate movements, he covers Zack’s dick with his hand, leaning down to place a soft kiss on the side of his mouth. He moves his mouth lower and lower until he gets to Zack’s navel. Still moving his hand up and down Zack’s erection, he runs his tongue around his belly button. Zack arches his back and his right hand comes to tangle itself in Jack’s hair, pulling lightly. Jack grins and moves lower. With a smirk up at the blonde, he sucks on his hip bone, gently at first, but getting rougher by the second. His teeth nip at the skin, sure to leave a mark.

Once he’s satisfied that he’s successfully marked Zack as his own, his eyes move up and he can’t help but smile. The hand that isn’t tangled in Jack’s hair is thrown over his eyes and he’s biting his lip. He tugs on Jack’s hair and Jack takes that to mean ‘keep going’. In order to get better access, Jack moves so that he’s between Zack’s legs again. He stares down at his erection and then slowly, he covers it with his mouth.

Immediately, Zack’s hips jerk up, and Jack throws his arm over them in order to keep him still so that he doesn’t choke – that wouldn’t be good at all. A loud moan escapes Zack’s lips as Jack sucks on the tip and uses his hand to stroke what’s not in his mouth. He does his best to tease Zack, but not too much that would drive him absolutely crazy. His head bobs up and down for a while, until his jaw begins to ache. With a soft ‘pop’, he removes his mouth and crawls up to his boyfriend.

“Are you ready?” he whispers, pushing Zack’s legs apart and running his hand smoothly along the inside of his thighs. His own erection is pressing almost painfully against Zack’s leg.

“So ready.”

Jack reaches over the side of the bed into his duffle bag, grabbing the lube from the side pocket. He uncaps it and squirts a good amount into the palm of his hands. He makes sure his fingers are generously coated before bending Zack’s legs. He circles Zack’s entrance with one finger for a second, and then presses it inside. He hears Zack gasp, and that makes him move just a little bit faster. In minutes, he has three fingers stretching him open, making sure that he’ll be absolutely ready for Jack. When Zack starts pushing back on his fingers, trying to take in more, Jack removes them, much to Zack’s disappointment.

I had to quote...
Yes I'm THAT much of a perve!
XD
At least that's what my friends say...
SO... HOT!!!

Zack opens his mouth to protest, but instead he gasps loudly as Jack pushes his entire length into his body. His legs hook around Jack’s waist and his hands desperately grip the sheets.

“Don’t hold back, okay?”

Zack nods as Jack pins his hands above his head. “You can start moving.”

Jack complies, pulling nearly almost all the way out and thrusting back in, his movements rough and fast, just like he knows Zack likes it. He angles his thrusts to hit Zack’s prostate every time, forcing loud gasps and profanities to escape his boyfriend’s soft lips. When they first had sex, a while back, Jack was surprised to find how vocal Zack could be, seeing as the bassist rarely talks in interviews, and he’s just a quiet guy altogether. But he surprised Jack, and he continues to do so every day.

“Jack, I need -”

Before the older boy can even finish his request, Jack fulfills it, reaching down and taking Zack’s dick in his hands. He jerks roughly, in time with his thrusts. The way Zack’s body arches off the bed every time Jack thrusts in signals that he’s close to his orgasm – and he’s right. Zack shouts quite a few profanities strung together as he comes, coating Jack’s hand and both of their chests with his release.

Seeing Zack’s facial expressions as he orgasms sets Jack off as well, and with a few more thrusts he releases into Zack’s spent body. Both of them still, their hearts slowly returning to their normal pattern.

Yup... it's official!
I am a perve.
XD
*drools*
(my best friend is laughing at me. But I don't care)
:D

“I’ll try to not flirt with Alex anymore… Sometimes we don’t realize that we’re doing it.”

Most people don't actually... It's weird.

With a smile, Jack places a soft kiss on the older boys’ shoulder and moves so his body is as close to his as possible. After a minute of silence, he inhales deeply – and then realizes something. “We haven’t properly kissed since you came into the room, you realize that?” When he doesn’t get an answer, his smile widens. Zack’s breathing is soft and even, meaning that he’s already asleep. Jack leans over and kisses him on the lips gently so not to wake him, and whispers, ‘I’ll love you forever, I promise.’

*squeals*
AWE!
What a perfect ending to an amazing story!
You truly are talented and I can't wait to read more of your work.
Even if I usually am a silent reader.
:D

Hehe.
I'm glad that they kissed and made up.
:)

awwww :)
loved the ending!

Awhh. I love how you can fit fluff and sex right next to each other so well. xD
Lovely for a short story. [x

awww so cute!!
i loved that ending! XD

i love you for updating.

I'd worry more that Jack would puke on Zack if they had sex.
I picked up the E-mail that this had updated at work, and I SO wanted to read it right there (which would've been fine with the boss, believe it or not), but my co-worker would've looked over my shoulder and laughed at me. D:

Jack freezes. That voice belongs to Zack. Why is Zack speaking to him as is he was never mad at him?

Cause he loves you dumbass!
lol

“I got you some water,” Zack explains, “And I bought Advil, but I don’t think I’m going to let you take any.” He reaches into the bag and pulls out the bottle of Advil. Jack stares at it longingly. “The pharmacist told me that you actually really shouldn’t take painkillers to treat a hangover. She said it makes it worse.”

Awe! See, he cares!
^^

“Don’t ever think for a second that I’m using you. I only said that because I was frustrated with everyone – and I lashed out at you, which was wrong. I love you.”

Zack nestles his face into the crook of Jack’s neck and smiles. “Good, because I love you too."

YAY!
*dances*

“Make love to me later. After the show.”

Hehe.
*kinky thoughts run through mind*
XD
I'm not a pervert!

Next chapter is the last one!

AWE!
*cries*
I'm gonna miss this story!
*pouts*

If you're interesting, I've started a new story called 'New Perspective' . It's a Zack/Alex story. Check it out ? :)

YAYYYYYYY!
XD

Okay so I have a bit of creative crit. Please don't take this as a negative thing. So many people do and it's not meant that way! You seem to start most paragraphs the same, like with their names. In third person that makes the story seem a bit choppy. But if you replace some of the names with 'he, his, then etc.' then it makes the chapter run smoother.

Can't wait to read the last chapter and your new story!
^^

aww :)
update sooooooon

Update please!!!!

yayyyy you updated!
pleaseeee update soon :)
i love this

i realllly hope that jack can work this out with zack.
they both obviously love each other, now jack just needs to man up and talk to zack.
hopefully he has one hell of a hangover. not gonna lie, he klind of deserves it. >.<

nice update.
the wait is like a dramatic pause in the story.

Aww, no need to apologize. :D
It was well worth the wait.