Falling in love at a coffee shop - Comments

I really enjoyed it. I liked how you put a bit of town history and backstory into the beginning. It really set the scene, so to speak.

Another little thing I noticed and liked was how you first wrote his impressions of her, and then switched to hers of him. It was a nice touch.

And of course the ending was brilliant. Upbeat and sweet, without being over the top. It was hopeful.

Good job. :cute:

U should definitly continue!!!!!
I wanna see what happens next!!!!!