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  • Em.Shadows

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    I seriously LOVE the description in this, you pretty much make someone feel as if they are in the story.
    Good job on your details :]
    August 14th, 2010 at 06:49am
  • Kellin Quinn

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    Ugh, everyone stole what I was going to say about your story.
    You can really paint a picture...
    Love it so far.

    [keep writing]
    October 21st, 2009 at 06:55am
  • Shadowrisen

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    Another awesome chapter. :)
    September 24th, 2009 at 06:26pm
  • Crazed4Life

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    Plane crash, wow. It just keeps getting more interesting.
    September 22nd, 2009 at 04:29am
  • Shadowrisen

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    Oo ooh ooh. Keep going. It's good so far. :DD
    September 22nd, 2009 at 03:35am
  • Heather-Bear

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    oh my god, i CANNOT write anything that discriptive. it was like i was seeing everything in front of my eyes!
    wonderful job!!! :D
    September 22nd, 2009 at 02:32am
  • alexaonfire ;;

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    ahhhh you left me hangingggggggggg :(
    more soon!
    <3
    September 22nd, 2009 at 02:25am
  • she floats

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    Whoa, freaky.
    September 22nd, 2009 at 02:22am
  • she floats

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    Hmm.
    I want to know more. [: Hinthint, you should update. x]
    Very descriptive, and I can see it all happening.
    And I'd be pissed if I found out I was randomly going to a boarding school.
    September 21st, 2009 at 05:33am
  • NatalieOMFG!

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    Awesome.
    This story is like reading a book.:)
    September 19th, 2009 at 09:15pm
  • Crazed4Life

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    Yea for chapter 2.
    It was longer than the first and I liked it.
    September 19th, 2009 at 09:05pm
  • Death.Is.My.Passion

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    Hm
    Interesting start
    Great visuals
    I like it
    Can't wait for more
    September 19th, 2009 at 06:04pm
  • chewnait

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    Dude, this was reallygood awesome.
    You have excellent visuals and I can imagine every detail.
    ^^ Excellent! (Yeah, I've said it before, I'll say it again!) :)
    September 19th, 2009 at 05:43pm
  • version two point oh

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    It doesn't bite.
    You're great at visualizations.
    September 19th, 2009 at 05:27pm
  • Crazed4Life

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    I liked it. It was detailed nicely and I could visualize it.
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
    September 19th, 2009 at 05:18pm
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