I do not know what you are talking about; this was - simply state - a realistic situation of a female, or institutionalized, who has had something traumatize her life and knows she living it off staring into oblivion. The situation you can read between the lines is something you can grasp before you reach the end.
You doubt your talent; I was inaudibly in-awe. I was actually thinking of writing something along the same lines as this short-story (making it about a few other people with diagnosed issues) but I don't think I will if you can create this in so short of words, however, still breathtakingly beautiful - a downfallen beauty.