Underneath Your Clothes - Comments

I loved this!

I love this! I love it! Greatly story!

Hahaha i loved it!

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"It's not that I don't love you guys or your house, but I'm exhausted. This is literally the first time I've sat down all day. It's nice, since the couch feels like angels made it. I may fall asleep."

Tom couldn't help being smug. He had picked out the couch.

I love that. It's so Tom. Kudos for that :cute:

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"Well! I have to say, your extravagant idea was brilliant. Applause for you!" Bill said happily, clapping his hands together a few times.

Tom barely raised his glass. "Yay me."

Same here. He's so funny the way you write him. I like it.

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"You fucking deserted me at our own housewarming! Do you know what that felt like? I felt like some decoration, like one of those vases on the table. 'Oh, he's pretty, but don't touch him he's fragile! For eyes only!' Jesus."

Mm. *nod* Powerful.

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Without a word, they started to sway on the spot, pressed close together, Bill's forehead against Tom's. Dancing to nothing.

That's beautiful, too. Dancing to nothing. I love that.

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"I swear it's like you're made of cheese or something. That was so nerdy," Tom joked, kissing Bill's neck.

:XD

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"Tell me, Bill. What's underneath your clothes?"

Bill took one of Tom's hands, guided it down the front of his shirt underneath the fabric, and up to his ribs. "Your territory."

Oh, that was epic.

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Before Bill could protest further, Tom pressed his lips to Bill's heel. Bill bit his lip and squeaked. When Tom's lips moved to the arch of Bill's foot, Bill's hands were scrabbling for something to grab onto, his nails digging into the soft fabric of the back of the couch.

:twitch: FOOTSEX.

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"Ah, ah, ah!" Tom said with a scolding expression. He slowly moved his hips back. "You said you'd watch."

Bill forced himself to look down to where he and Tom were connected. Tom buried himself to the hilt inside of Bill again, thrusting, angling himself differently every time. Bill was panting slightly.

Tom thrust in once more and touched something. Bill made a noise that sounded like he was being choked and arched his back, curling his toes on the fabric of the couch.

"Come on, Bill. Watch me."

Let me just say that Tom's teasing in this is adorable x]

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"Ugh, Bill, I'm going to kill you!"

Bill looked up from his work-in-progress sandwich and furrowed his eyebrows. "Why?"

Tom leant his forehead against the cool walls. "You got that stupid song stuck in my head."

Bill tried to fight back a smile. "Aw, I'm sorry."

"Yeah, you are sorry."

Bill smiled and went back to working on his sandwich. He placed a slice of cheese on the deli meat and started murmuring, "Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story."

Tom wailed and ran upstairs. Bill heard a door slam then heard a very, very loud Samy Deluxe song start to play.

Bill laughed and finished making his sandwich.

That was just the perfect ending to this fic. How nonchalant it was. Very good.

I quite enjoyed this. That's saying something since most TH fics here don't impress me a bit. But this one was good. Very original plot and such. Good character development. You kept it moving nicely. Good for you :cute:

Dear Morgna,
You're the reason I have to change my panties.
Love, Logan.

BTW, comment virginity.
Calling it Genevieve.
Because..
Long story.