Dr. Feelgood - Comments

  • Angel of Vengeance

    Angel of Vengeance (100)

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    Holy crap, this was good. I loved the ending because it was hilarious.

    "So, how about a date?", yeah that should have been the first thing instead of what you wrote, but I liked it anyway. Great job and I enjoyed the professions that you chose. Made it all the better....haha.
    March 13th, 2010 at 11:17pm
  • Freak Out

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    wow...
    but i did notice a mistake.
    it was in word count, i believe the actual word count is 0
    because this one shot renders one speechless.
    it also renders the reader in need of a new pair of underwear.
    best one shot hands down.
    September 22nd, 2009 at 12:06am
  • Midnight. Shadows.

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    :shock: holy....crap...Its too early to...be what that story makes you...WOW. That was steamy...nice choice of profession by the way. For both characters.

    It was amazing I enjoyed reading it...

    Lol btw...Synyster gate's dog is pinkly...Not Matts...Matts dog is named bella. But understandable since you jus started mining them. Lol.
    September 20th, 2009 at 05:15pm