Only on Tuesdays - Comments

I don't think the chapter was that short. But I liked it nonetheless. ^^
I BET LORRAINE TURNED INTO A BIRD! O_O

I love the new layout!
I see that someone mentioned the "eyesore" line. >.>

This is really a cool idea for a story. The way you write, you can really connect with the characters and feel a part of the story. Please continue when you can, it's a lot of fun to read. :]

Your layout is beautiful.

I knew I looked an eyesore - you forgot to put "like" in this sentence.

Then end was a tad confusing since you switched the characters, you might want to do something about that. Maybe a page divider or just the person's name before the change...

Your writing is fantastic, I'm really glad I clicked on this.
Please continue this. I've only read the first chapter, but I plan to read more.
I'm subscribing, keep on writing.
=)

And I loved the character too.

I love this. I really wish you'd write more.