Soon Enough. - Comments

I'm actually slightly afraid of that photo.

But dude this was beautiful.
I agree with whittaker lake.

It's really quite deep. i hate shallow writing, and this really renewed my faith in new authors.
The nostalgia and darkness of it all was enchanting. Nice one ;)

This was just… wow.

I really liked this, I cant even tell you how much.

I commented the others so I picked this one :)

I didn't really like the layout. It was a bit hard to read.
As for the story it was pretty good. I liked how there was a bit of reminiscing going on.
All in all pretty good. :}

Awesome work! It was a little hard to read, because the text was a little dark. But other than that, great job!

Must concer on the liking of how she would always repeat 'but that didnt matter, or at least it wouldnt soon enough.'

Brilliant story.

I liked how you went through the different times and how she felt. It was nicely worded, good lenght, and I liked the repetition "But that didn’t matter. Or at least it wouldn’t soon enough."

I like the thought and the emotion you put into it. Good job!!

this was great, I love how you kepte going through different part of her life, and then just kept ending the paragraph after with but that wouldn't matter soon enough.
It was a great story, and kept my attention

wow this was awesome to read! good job

beautiful..weird...it was the two sides of myself talking to each other...the little boy always wins

lovely:)

It was amazing. :)

Just some slight errors, nothing to do with the storyline or anything. It was really good. :)

Hello, darling.

This story was written very well, as usual. I do not think it needs any critiquing, so just accept that and move on with your life.

:cute: - Erica