2004 - Comments

RushKnob:

(-: this is really great,
it's so simple & short but for some reason it was really good,
Ima check out other stuff you wrote

=) I'm really glad you liked it. I think sometimes shorter things can be more powerful than trying to drag an emotion or memory out, y'know?

Thanks for checking out other writing. Always nice to get reads/comments. =)

(-: this is really great,
it's so simple & short but for some reason it was really good,
Ima check out other stuff you wrote

fluff face richey.:

The clothes are cute, but the memories were better.

What a great way to end it. I liked that it was short, because it seemed like that is all you needed, was that small amount of detail for your point to get across. I could picture everything almost clearly in the back of my mind, which is what I like to be able to do during a story.

Seriously, a great job. Keep it up.

=) Thanks so much for the comment. Glad you liked it!

The clothes are cute, but the memories were better.

What a great way to end it. I liked that it was short, because it seemed like that is all you needed, was that small amount of detail for your point to get across. I could picture everything almost clearly in the back of my mind, which is what I like to be able to do during a story.

Seriously, a great job. Keep it up.