Aw this was cute. I think it captured the decisions a teen mother has to make in the birth of her baby perfectly. The beginning was spectacular, even though I hate Ryan for trying to force her to choose abortion. I love how things worked out for her in the end. The only mistake I really saw was "For hours, all I did was to think." I'm pretty sure the "to" doesn't go in there. Fantastic entry.
I think it captured the decisions a teen mother has to make in the birth of her baby perfectly.
The beginning was spectacular, even though I hate Ryan for trying to force her to choose abortion.
I love how things worked out for her in the end.
The only mistake I really saw was "For hours, all I did was to think." I'm pretty sure the "to" doesn't go in there.
Fantastic entry.