Too Perfect - Comments

I really liked how she didn't end up with Jack. It was a nice touch (:

This was great..
I really enjoyed reading it and it was definetly captivating. I thought it was really good and well-written. And it's considerably longer then the other pieces, so you get extra points haha :).
It must of been terribly difficult for Jack to have to do that.
But he did it.
I loved that this wasn't cliche.
Most people do the whole getting married, find out best friend likes me, marries him instead kind of story.
So I loved that this was different and you clearly defined the struggles that Jack had in mind.
I can honestly say I loved it :D

PS: results for the contest will be posted REALLY soon. In about an hour/half an hour ;)
good luck!

-Liliann.

that was like really depressing, but well written.

kel:

this was an ahhmazing one-shot!!!
if you wanted you could even make a story-line out of it!
good job!!!

this was an ahhmazing one-shot!!!
if you wanted you could even make a story-line out of it!
good job!!!