i loved it ! i really liked how you incorporated the lyrics, but then put a twist on them to make them specific to avery; like how she was a star softball player and used a baseball bat, or the swiss army knife was given to her by tj.
loveloveloveloveloveloveloved it! i can't say that enough :) <3 ps. i'm glad you're back
Damn, Lyssa. That was harsh. But I liked it. It's nice to read a story about something other than 2 people falling in love and all that bullshit. Cause people fall out of love to. <333
BAM! BAM! BAM! WOOT WOOT! damn.. that was fucking amazing!!! and i'm so glad that you are back.. but i expected to not like this because it woudn't be happy but you made me want her to not be with TJ.. that takes talent babycakes.. and you've definitely got it :D rawr! I loved this.. and you.. can't wait for more oshie! :D
I loved this almost as much as I love you. I saw myself in it in so many ways. You know me and the whole bitch thing ;). But my God, I don't even feel bad for Teej. Ass. He deserved it all.
I lol'd really hard about Bergie sleeping. I was just thinking, lazy, good for nothing, God damn Swede.