My Everything - Comments

hey its a good sequel to the previous chapters.
i know, it's been a while.
anyway, good job.
lol, jonas bothered me a tiny bit, but i got over it, haha
good work.
<3

Well, I love it. I don't really care if it is Nick Jonas.
It's a very good story.
I'm not one for fan-fictions, but this is amazing material.
Can't wait for more!

~Jaz

well
firstly
Nick Jonas.
could you be any less obvious?
i don't really like story that are based on famous people, and it really dissapointed me when in chapter 2, Mrs 'Jonas' was introduced.
i felt a lot more comfortable when she was called 'Denise' instead, unlesss of course that is the real name of the Jonas brother's mum, but i'm not a big fan on them, so i'm don't know.
So, i put 2 and 2 together, and it seems you are putting Nick Jonas in this story, i should have realised when you described him.
but.
Before an of the Jonas mnas stuff staretd, i was genuily interested in this story.
But because i jus don't enjoy fan-fition like stuff, i can't handle it.
sorry, but i'm sure Jonas lovers will be star struck.
good work.
<3