R.E.D.M. - Comments

Hello deary.
First off, wow.
I really quite enjoyed this story. What about it exactly, I’m not sure, but regardless it was good. I did stumble upon a few errors, but they weren’t noticeable ones. I’m just a weirdy for seeing them lol. I liked the fact that you kept it simple. I think that may be where I found the appeal. You cut unnecessary crap, and got right to it.

Because of this, I’d like to give you a round of applause, and inform you that you have placed first.

Your prize is… (I’m not sure if my co-judges will be able to fulfill their part as both are unavailable at the moment)

A link on my signature for a month --- A link on mine and my co-judges profiles for a month --- I, and I shall attempt to coax Johnny, will read and comment on three of your other pieces (story, poems, etc - only up to ten chapters on stories, and if I like it I’ll continue) --- I will whore your story on Twitter --- I will also attempt a banner if you wish

amazing!! of you know i know that!
annie: tabatha is an awesome writer, you should write more!

i love Bert and this story was amazing :)