Following You - Comments

oooh i love :)

oh wow, this story is amazing. i love your writing. they way you narrate tom, it feels so real! i love where this is going. this story has me hooked so much. i wonder whats going to happen, i have some thoughts, but i'm probably wrong on them. please update soon, im so excited to know whats to come! this is going to be a great tom story! (: update again soon!

continue this!! i hope you update soon because im hungry for more!

This is going to be a great story… I can tell!
But please update soon. <3

Ooh! Its her, isnt it?!
Gosh Im excited :)

Ooh! Its her, isnt it?!
Gosh Im excited :)

I'm really loving this story. :3 Update soon.

Oh! and I forgot to mention, I also like how Tom made a special little fuss because he got something first for once. It seemed repetitive throughout those paragraphs, which really made it clear and how important it felt to Tom, even when he stated that he didn’t even want it that much (Y). Brilliant :)

Oohh I love where this is going!
Hehe, the thought of Tom in a suit makes me giggle (Y)

Anyway, this story is going at the right pace, which is obviously good. It’s not too fast or too slow, but I’m still wanting to know what happens next!
I could also picture everything in my head very clearly, like the ballroom in particular and all the posh people. (Y)

I don’t know if it’s just me, but the sentences where you wrote ‘weren’t’ don’t seem to flow together.

i.e He obviously weren’t happy,

I think that should be, “He obviously wasn’t happy.”

I just think that makes a bit more sense in its context :)

Besides that, there’s no other spelling or grammar mistakes I’ve seen (Y) you’re doing really well with this story :D
x

:3 Again, you write wonderful updates.
Update again sooon, pleaseee!

Oh && I absolutely ADORE the fact that you used one of Tom's photos for the banner. And its not just a picture of HIM. Its like, just one of HIS photos. You know what I mean?

Ooh Ooh!
Is he going to meet the girl that he 'obsesses' over in the next chapter?!
Goodness Im excited :)
Oh && thanks for putting my story in your authors note :D

I'm loving this so far. I'm excited to see what comes next. :3
Update soon, pleaseee!

Oh! I didn't know you'd posted this!
I really love it so far! It's clear and concise, so I can follow along so easily; and it already sounds very well developed. All that background information about his girlfriend was very interesting, and believable at that (since I’ve read some stories that have some bloody stupid girlfriend/boyfriend backgrounds).

I haven’t spotted mistakes, which is obviously good :D
You are such a brilliant writer, I hope you know that! I don’t know if I’ve ever told you that I usually hate reading other people’s fan fictions, but yours, and a few other talented writers on here, are definite exceptions. I love everything you write :’)

Wooots!
i'm glad I was able to help you out even though i bet Katie beat me to it XD
Amazing chapter though i can't wait to see the outcome of this

WOOT WOOT!!!!
OMFG!
I've been waiting so long for thiss :)
Hey hey! Hmmm... I wonder who that Holli girl is...
:D
I'ma gonna get you some more readers for this, just because it's that amazing; and it's only the first chapter! Haha.
Damn, I don't know how you manage to make people fall IN LOVE with your stories with only chapter 1. But I like it :)
Soooo keep it uppp! Because I can't wait until the next chapter! && is it alright if I put this story in my signature to pimp it out?

Oh goodness goodness goodness!
The anticipation is KILLING MEE!!!

OMFGGGG!!!
Hell yeah, girl!
God I really can't wait for this one!
For some reason I think this one will be my favorite =]