This story is wonderfully amazing. You're a fantastic writer. You're so amazingly talented. Oh, and if you don't update, http://www.lolsauce.com/RandomBS/Pedo%20bear.png WATCHOUT.
I just started reading today, because for some reason I only recently listened to them and before now I've never had the urge to read anything like this.
This is amazing. You are a wonderful writer! I'm subscribing; this is way too cute.
I think that the pov's are good cause it gives a bit more insight to the character's thoughts, but I've got no ideas/preferences for what the next chapter would be.. Hm... I adore this story so much! John and Pat are so adorable and I can def see John being the sweetest bf ever :3 Love love love <3
this story is sooooo good and im going to die of anticipation!!!