I stupidly hit submit before finishing. the character Naomi was so real, I can imagine her as a person. She wasn't two dimensional like so many people in other stories. This was just breathtakingly beautiful. YOur writing style is interesting and brilliant to read through. This made me want to cry, but it was also really sweet. I was a tad bit confused at first, thinking Naomi was really young, but then when i realized she wasn't my mind was blown. The way you wrote this was flawless.
December 23rd, 2012 at 05:31pm