Forever, XO - Comments

This is a fantastic story. I can't get over how good you are at making your characters real. They just breathe truth and honesty, as though they represent some part of humanity. If that makes sense at all.
Your descriptions are incredible, your situation intriguing, and, as I've said, your characters flawless.
Love it.

I love how you start out the beginning of this by talking about the ring. You spend a whole paragraph just describing the ring, which makes it obvious it's a significant part of the story, which really pulled me in to be honest. :D

I also love that you use the words "Fuck" and "Fucking" in random places. A lot of people say that it's cause you can't find a more intelligent word, but I like to think that it just makes the situation seem that much more intense.

I'm not one for sex scenes, but good God, that was incredible how you wrote that. I wasn't disgusted by any of it, or had to skim over any of it. It was almost pretty how you described it.

I loved it. :D

I enjoyed this muchly... It was very interesting...

Dude, Korie!
I loved it!

Oh, my. That was hot and sexy and beautiful and just. Wow! Loved it, I think it turned out wonderful. The mystery in it kept me reading. And Jeph of course :)