When Hope Begins to Fade - Comments

  • MarriahShadz

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    I really do not like Aaron. Can't he just let shit go?
    Jeez.
    That update gave me a creepy feeling, not gonna lie.
    Makes me wonder how much control Aaron has over Vivian.
    March 22nd, 2010 at 06:42am
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    Wow, all that stessing out over some romantic get-away,
    I was not expecting that at all.
    I was pretty much thinking along the same lines as Matt there.
    And Aaron's back. It was so creepy how he was just waiting in their apartment.
    I wished she'd hit him or something.
    Awesome update.
    February 17th, 2010 at 08:03am
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    I'm cool with the new title.
    Man, this chapter raised a whole bunch of questions.
    What is Amber hiding?
    Why does Matt want a house so badly?
    What does Matt need to tell Amber? Why is he afraid of her reaction to his news? It is bad or good?
    When will we find out?
    January 24th, 2010 at 06:43am
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    If the new title is more fitting for the plot line, then I'm a little worried...
    But I liked that last chapter.
    I need to know this secret.
    It's killing me.
    Please, tell me you'll tell us soon?
    January 18th, 2010 at 06:21am
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    I still have a strong feeling that Amber is pregnant.
    Good chapter, I think it's cute that there was a big party for Amber and Lisa's parents.
    That Dale kid, though, total jerk.
    January 6th, 2010 at 07:07pm
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    What is making Amber sick? Is she pregnant?
    I wish Lisa and Johnny would just get back together again instead of wasting time.
    December 23rd, 2009 at 11:19pm
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    Johnny is the best...okay, Brian is....okay, Matt really is the best.
    I found that chapter really funny for some reason.
    Looking forward to more when you can.
    Oh and Aylce's plan was hilarious, maybe she can use it later?
    October 20th, 2009 at 07:16am
  • ShadowsFiction

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    Ahh I can't wait for more!!
    October 16th, 2009 at 08:36am
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    Since I can't edit my last comment, I forgot to mention that when Amber first walked into the apartment, I thought it was Aaron who was there and not Alyce.
    Speaking of Alyce, I'm sensing some seperation of her and Amber.
    Hope that's all in my head.
    Okay, seriously, I can't wait for the next update, but you take your time with it, I can wait...for the most part.
    October 3rd, 2009 at 08:12am
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    Anthony was annoying in that funny I-can't-stand-the-guy-you're-living-with-but-I-can't-do-anything-but-pout-about-it kind of way.
    I was cracking up when they were at dinner.
    That waitress, bet she was glad that she had to work that night, I would've been,
    When I got to the end, and I saw my name, I had to do a double take. I can't stop smiling. That was awesome, thanks, kid.
    Is that why you asked me that question earlier?
    So my first question in the first comment was answered.
    Zack and Amber need to get Johnny and Lisa back together.
    Can't wait for the next chapter!
    October 3rd, 2009 at 08:10am
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    Awh I loved it....Grr her dad was pissing me off he needs to get over himself!! Can't wait for more!!!
    October 3rd, 2009 at 07:05am
  • MarriahShadz

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    Aaron's coming back?
    Uh oh.
    Can't wait to start reading this and see what you have in store for Amber and Matt.
    Are Lisa and Johnny still together?
    October 3rd, 2009 at 03:53am