New Perspective - Comments

I'm glad you have updated. I really do love the story and I do wish you would update a bit quicker. Pwease :'3 n_n <3

- Hana Hadrosaurr.

AHHH! YOU UPDATED! Made me sooo happy.

Aww, I really liked it. Can't wait for more.

I just realized I haven't commented this. Ugh. Fail. :/

so, I'm going to do my best and comment each chapter. :] I suck at writing anything meaningful, and I have yet to find something I don't absolutely love about this.

Chapter 1:
You totally nailed the characters. Definitely. And I laughed at the "MONTENEGRO!" thing. xD ANd I adore Angela's reaction. Because Sweets IS an adorable last name. :D

Chapter 2:
So after the first paragraph, I completely love your portrayal of Zack. <3 And this:

"Why?"

"This is juvenile!"

"You suck!"

had me laughing SO hard, and I have no idea why. The weirdest thing strike me as hilarious. But another awesome chapter. :D

Chapter 3:
Love Jack's letter to Zack. :D
And Seeley's original letter to Bren. LOL.

and also...
"Oh, lots of things! Where I come from, all about this town and how it's so small compared to home, fashion - "

"Wait. You did not seriously write to him about fashion, right?"

"No!...Well, maybe a little..."

how very Angela. xD WIN.

This seems very interesting. I like it =D consider me subscribed.

it's good. different than in the lab.
kinda cool.