Falling In Love At A Coffee Shop. - Comments

This was so adorable! :D
I love that song. :D
But I agree with some people up there, it could've been broken up a tad.

It was really cute and sweet :)

Aww this was short and sweet. I liked it. :D

One shot for one shot

Aww, this was totally gorgeous. I loved the plot, and the description, especially the first few lines.

I also adored it's simplicity. It's simply a short little love story about two people meeting for the first time. There's nothing complicated or confusing about it.

My only criticism is the fact that it was one long chunk of text, rather like the glass passenger has already said. It would just make it personally a little bit easier to read if you maybe separeted some of it so that they formed individual paragraphs.

But this is so cute and gorgeous, and I think I've fallen in love with it.

One Shot For One Shot.

This was so very sweet. (:
I really liked the plot of it and how you described the opening scene.

However, I do think it could use breaks every few sentences or so. It seemed like it was a giant block of text and it was a bit hard on the eyes. I also think it could use a bit more character description. That's just a personal thing, though.

I did like the simplicity of it and how the emotions could be felt in such few words. Good job!

How sweet. :]
I liked the description and lack of speech.
It was well done.

I like this quite a lot!
This song is so amazing, and it fits in well with the story.
You're a very good writer =]