I'm Leaving on a Jet Plane - Comments

I liked this. I liked how you kept your sentences short and sharp, and as zimmer 483;; said, it helped make an impact.
I also liked how you repeated the 'I forgave, I forgot' bit.
And I liked the moving plane in the picture. :)

Oh, this is so sweet.

It's so short but it's really powerful. I love how you kept your sentences short and to the point. It really helped impact :]

So yeah. Good job.