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  • imagine27

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    I absolutely LOVE IT!!!! <3
    Jareth. What a perfect name for him.
    I can't wait until the next update. I wonder how much more will Abigail remember?

    I agree with xDorksXareXcoolx: give us more of this magical tale! :D
    March 9th, 2010 at 01:40am
  • Dorkiness

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    ...wolfthing..? That happens to be related to mystery boy/Jareth... And a girl with knives and guns that knows Abigail/Jane... And there's magic...

    GIVE ME MORE PLEASE?
    March 8th, 2010 at 04:01am
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    Hmmm.... Definately different from anything you might get from the first few chapters. I LOVE it!
    February 20th, 2010 at 04:54pm
  • imagine27

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    KATE!!!!!! <3
    Great description.
    I love the entire idea of lux patrones, and the power within her hero's blue eyes!
    It's intense :)
    I can't wait to see what comes next!
    Thanks for the dedication! <3
    February 16th, 2010 at 10:28pm
  • imagine27

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    I LOVE IT KATE!
    <3 great suspense!
    write more soon please!
    February 12th, 2010 at 11:28pm
  • Dorkiness

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    Erica Lynne Reveiws says that 'the order' makes her think of Harry Potter, except with a little bit of fright.
    November 24th, 2009 at 02:47am
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    The order...sounds scary!!!! cant wait for more.
    November 7th, 2009 at 03:34am
  • moonhipposwrite

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    OOOOOH wonder whatz hapening next who is datguy?!
    November 7th, 2009 at 03:07am
  • Parachute;

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    Ahhh ur killing me. Another cliff hanger!!!! Ugh.
    November 5th, 2009 at 06:13am
  • moonhipposwrite

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    OOOH lA LA- WOnder why he;s there!
    November 3rd, 2009 at 02:44am
  • Alexis_Is_Here

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    wow this is a really really good story keep adding on to it!!!!!!!
    November 3rd, 2009 at 01:18am
  • Dorkiness

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    I'm sooo confused. A story of mystery and intirgue- it's keeping me waiting!

    Erica Lynne Reveiws demands more.
    November 1st, 2009 at 08:53pm
  • moonhipposwrite

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    Awwwwwww that was sooooo cute!Hes soooo mysterious-maybe hes the killer?
    November 1st, 2009 at 06:15pm
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    love the cliff hanger!!!!
    November 1st, 2009 at 05:28am
  • moonhipposwrite

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    :( Sad u cant update faster., but that was amazing cnt wait to see who dah hero is!
    October 31st, 2009 at 04:48am
  • moonhipposwrite

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    cant wait to se3 whats gonna happen!:)
    September 29th, 2009 at 12:24am
  • Doctor

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    Very, very, VERY good start. Intriguing, mysterious...the readers has NO OTHER CHOICE but to finish reading. Therefor I am subscribing. Wonderful work.
    September 27th, 2009 at 10:16pm
  • Parachute;

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    Oh new story!!!!! I wonder where is this going!!!!!
    September 27th, 2009 at 09:45pm
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