Did Someone Say Draco Malfoy? - Comments

very nicely done

This made me sad!
How could Draco be so heartless?

loved it, aaaah cliffhanger ima read the next one now, and are you an avpm fan by any chance??

I love it! It was amazing! I'm just saying, you should write at least one more chapter!

I LOVE IT :D Then again, I love Draco slash Tom Felton >.> So, when I saw your back ground image i was jumping for joy ^,.,^ :D
Lots of Love<3

After reading towards the end I thought she was going to say she was pregnant or something.
Haha.
Then that happend and all I could do was stare at my laptop for a few seconds and the only words that would leave my mouth was; "What?"
Then another drawn out; "Whaat?"
Lmao.

Awww so freaking cute. :D
Fabulous job keeping Drakey in character. I don't care what people think, I just warn that the characters are OOC in my story.
And that ending line...! So great.
Some of your sentences were a tad confusing, you might want to watch your grammar.
Still a great oneshot, though! ^.^

This is really, really great!
I love it! :) it was sad but I really liked it!
This has part of A Very Potter Musical in it! Love that musical. :)
Great job! :D

I'm sorry it took so to judge your story; I've been a little busy, mixed with forgetfulness.. x)
Anyhow.
You really captured Draco's personality very well. As sad as it was that he basically left her, it was like him. I'd rather he did that and say he loved her back. The beginning was a little bit awkward, but it got a lot better as it progressed. :)

Well done.

wow. That was amazing! the end was really sad, but good, it really bugs me when people put draco wayyy out of character, but you managed to keep him the same, while he didn't seem that ... annoying/mean till the end !! loved it!

omg rachel, this was amazing, i couldn't stop reading. :) i love your fan fic.

U should turn this into a story

Loved the begining, the fight with Severus and Ava, and the ending was brilliant. Excellent job(:

well, its very well writen, thats for sure. but draco is an arse.

Oooh I loved this :]
The end was sad, but what else would you expect from a Malfoy? ;]
Well done.
x

Oh it was so sad. I loved the story, Harry Potter Fan-Fiction isn't my...favourite I'll admit, but I love the books, so.. You've kinda got me with it because you just captured it so well.

I love Ava, you made her character come to life so wholy it was amazing, I loved her relationship with Snape, and how she acted around him. It was so well thought out I could picture it.
I love her relationship with Draco, also. How you portrayed him as a sarcastic little.. *cough* was really so much like the character, so it made me adore this story evern more.
The ending was incredibly sad. And the last line got me.
The fact you made it that Draco obviously couldn't handle the...commitment of someone loving him, or him even considering the fact he could love them back, is exactly how I imagine the character.
Amazing.

you should make a sequel=]

Wow, Draco really can't handle commitment, can he?
But it totally fits him!
Awesomeness.

This is a completely awesome one shot, even though it was rather depressing. I'm glad you won the contest!

It was sad.
But that is how he would react, I think.
Very good.