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  • Ace Lightning.

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    UPDATE THIS SOON OK I REALLY LIKE THIS :-)
    January 24th, 2012 at 12:41am
  • imagine.

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    Really like this story :)
    Update soon pwease?
    February 2nd, 2011 at 02:06pm
  • Lost.In.Stereo

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    sdhgjdglls
    I'm sad I never found this before.
    I really like it, update?
    November 14th, 2010 at 11:25pm
  • justeva.

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    i really like, please update....whenever :D
    August 14th, 2010 at 01:03am
  • carolexo

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    This story is amazing so far!
    -subscribes- :D
    July 6th, 2010 at 02:40am
  • summerhopes

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    i like it. continue please(:
    May 29th, 2010 at 10:20pm
  • heyyouovertheir123

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    Subbed 'cause I love it.
    May 23rd, 2010 at 05:12pm
  • Hell Cat

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    Can't wait for the next update. :)
    -Loooove-
    April 27th, 2010 at 04:17pm
  • xxcityofdreamsxx

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    I love this!!!
    -gives u a cupcake;
    update more?
    :)
    February 1st, 2010 at 02:10am
  • Nytestalker

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    la-la-love! need more! might die! wouldnt want that to happen would we? then my death would be on you and nobody wants that grief! so update soon?!? m'kay? thankies! <3
    January 25th, 2010 at 04:41am
  • JoshRamsay.

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    sounds like it's gonna progress, keep up the good work :3
    November 14th, 2009 at 08:38am
  • JoshRamsay.

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    sounds like it's gonna progress, keep up the good work :3
    November 14th, 2009 at 08:38am
  • xmydecemberx

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    I really enjoy your writing and who would not want Ace to be protected by his older brother? If you could please update it would mean the world to me. <3
    October 17th, 2009 at 12:29am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    This is really good! You should totally update soon.
    October 6th, 2009 at 12:49am
  • The Unacceptable

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    I love it! Update soon please!!
    October 4th, 2009 at 05:14am
  • november rain;

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    Prologue 320 words, second chapter 960 words. x]
    Awesomeness. ^^ Update as soon as you can? X3
    October 2nd, 2009 at 04:50pm
  • november rain;

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    FINALLY! An actually well-written slash worth reading. x]
    I just read the prologue, and I'm hooked. ^^

    Just so you know, I don't read stories with bad grammar/spelling/punctuation/paragraphing/sentence structure or "over-clicheness". Basically... I only read well-written stuff.

    I can't stand it when lame (but frequently updated/randomly funny/popular-just-'cause-it's-slash) stories get publicity they don't deserve, and really good stories don't.

    Bleh, I'm ranting. Anyway, since you requested, I'll definitely criticize you if I find it necessary. xD Your plot is similar to two different plots I once thought of combined. Haha, this'll be really interesting to read. x]

    Update soonnnnnnnnnn. :]
    October 1st, 2009 at 04:25pm
  • go.effin.nuts

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    more more more more more! thers only two chaps posted but im loving this and i cant wait for the next update ^_^

    *subscribes*

    xTanei
    October 1st, 2009 at 02:58am
  • Eli Goldsworthy;

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    This is really good.
    I loves it.
    September 30th, 2009 at 03:15am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    this is really good
    September 29th, 2009 at 03:01am
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