Big Plans Are Coming Undone - Comments

Amazing!!! I just read the whole thing through!!! Post soon!!!

I kinda love this story :)
I just read it and it's great :)
I would seriously love all 3 of you if you updated it <3

=]

do you guys ever update this anymore im in love with it lol

update? plz? i can't wait to see wat happens with kylee and rian. this story is amazing and addicting! i LOVE it!

I feel sad now. it was so weird to read Rian being angry. hes so sweet. ugh, she should have just told him. grr. i really hope she comes back, or better yet, rian comes to get her, and saves her from being like raped or something. that would be magical. would u believe me if i told you that i just spelled magical, majicel? im so tired. and its only 9:19. im so pathetic. cant wait for the next chaper!!

<3sarah

Omg I fucking love this and you guys for writing it. Great job! Keep it up :) /end lame comment...

AHAH,
maggie is one of my bestfriends and she doesn't really read fanfiction but I was reading when she was over and she looked over my shoulder and felt the impulse to do it., But anyway, I called her and when I told her that you dedicated a chapter after her she felt honored C;

woahs hahahha XD

Ahhaha dick cake, love this story, can't wait for the next update!!

lmao that was just amazing :D

What a nice birthday!
Hmmm this year I want a penis cake from Jack!

What a nice birthday!
Hmmm this year I want a penis cake from Jack!

ahahha woooahh. update!? ~subscribing:)

aw... That was... I dunno... Update?

So cute! happy birthday!

Aw... Jack and Clare day... I loved it.. Update soon?

Aw cute. Nice update. I wonder who's baby it is, Jack or Rians! D:

aw.. I loved it... Update soon?

I loved that chapter.. it was amazing! Update soon?