Audible Cracks. - Comments

DARN! Here's a comment just to say something I forgot to earlier.

YOUR LAYOUT IS PWEETY. :3

Although that won't count for extra points in the contest or anything, I just felt like saying so. x]

Hmmmm.

This had emotion, that's for sure. Your sentences were pretty random and hectic, but that's what made it feel... realistic. You got into character pretty well back there. ^^

I loved the stuff about the snow and the tears, and how she was like a hanging angel, and how the ambulance weren't the angels he was looking for. Those were brilliant. x]

However, you had some grammatical errors there. Work on your tenses. Most people tend to confuse past and present tenses; you, I believe, confused your perfect past and perfect past continuous tenses. o.o That's pretty rare. Haha. xD So, um, be careful.

Mm, punctuation, spelling, paragraphing, etc. were all fine, I think.

All in all, good job. x]

HOW DARE THEY NOT COMMENT THIS!

So, first of all, I've said this before and I'll say it again, your stories are amazing. This one shot, held so much substance and it had a lot of emotions run through me. I freaking love it.

Of course, I've told you my favorite line, and you always have a way to write one line and just have it hold... so much, you know? I freaking love that.

The end of it D: It had been so long since I had loved Anne Louise.
IT'S JUST LIKE WOOOAHHH. I love thisssssss. I'm so surprised no one has commented it.