Over The Edge. - Comments

I enjoyed it, it was really interesting. There was one thing that I noticed that you did in your other one-shot, also. Sometimes you mix up tenses, saying "I liked this place," instead of "I liked that place", or something like that. It's minor, just something I noticed.

I thought the ending was good, how it said she didn't actually get over her fear but left me thinking maybe she would work to get over it with her husbands help.

Thanks for entering. :)