Picture Perfect, I Don't Want It - Comments

I just read this story. I really liked it. Even though it is cliché, it is true. As long as theyre together! At least thats what me and my girlfriend subscribe to.

I just read this.
I loved it. (:

Ohai! I know this story is over and done,but one more comment never hurts! :)
Anyway,I just wanted to say: I love this story! It was funny and sweet and sometimes just a little sad,and most of all captivating, you should have heard the things I yelled at my computer when it froze and refused to let me read more. On second thought...maybe not. But. I'd have to say my very favorite thing was the dust bunny thing. Probably 'cause I do the exact same thing at home, however, I don't come up with as original names. Anyway. This was just my long comment saying,I loved your story! Toddles!

*girlie screams*

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!
I LOVE it.
*smiles*
It really is..

Alright, so I just finished reading this for the second time, so I thought I'd comment.
First of all; DU AR FRAN NORGE = ascoolt!
Hej! jag = svensk!
Anyway...

I love it!
It's easy to tell that your first language isn't English, since there are some grammar mistakes and such, but there's not enough of them to annoy the reader. You simply let them pass, because you're too involved with the story to care.
Which is great!

Most of it was original, even if it did have some cliche's stuck in there, but that doesn't matter.

It was written in a brilliant and funny way.

And mostly I loved where Bert sat under a table eating chocolate while humming the pokemon themesong because I could totaly picure xD
Also, thanks for not making Bert the villain since that's been done and overdone.

Evil cats FTW!

Heja norge! :')

Grym fic, ascool, wei for you!

xxx Frankie, Svenskt Retard.

20 years from now we can live in a crappy apartment with no kids, a blind dog and a skinny, evil cat

I just read the whole thing!
Amaaaaaaaaaaaaazingggg!!

And I know a bazillion people have said it already, but the scrapbook was so awesome!
And I loved the last paragraph;
And there they sat. It wasn’t perfect. It was two homosexual boys, naked in a bed together. Arms wrapped tightly around each others bodies, lips kissing the naked skin they could reach. It wasn’t perfect. Far from it. But in the end, it didn’t matter. Who wants it to be picture perfect anyway?

Gah!
It was a great story.
Good job! ^__^

<333

*smiles and claps with tears in her eyes* That was amazing!!!!!!!! : )

I LOVE IT! Sequal?? plz???

Speachless.
Breathless.
Absolutely stunning.
I have to admit I did shed a tear or 2 at the end =]
<3

This story made me all warm inside.

I fucking loved it.

xoxo

That was the most perfect ending ever!!!!
I LOVED it!!! I read it twice!!! I might even go read it again!!!!!! :D

aww...fuck...that was the perfect ending to a perfect story! :oogles awesome story: thanks so fucking much for posting this story...its the greatest. really. :D i'm speechless...and cant think of much else to say...but i'm glad that gee picked frankie too...

fuck. my updater stopped updating me and as a result i have missed about 15 updates including the end!!! well i might as well start off by saying: there are no caps in this message. all letters are equal in gods eyes.

wow.

im looking at my first comment here, september 10th. this story has gotten so far in the short time that you took to finish it. and you deserve every comment, times a billion. and then before i was reading my comments for my story and saw that you posted, i am so fucking honored. seriously!!

this story was amazing (close to perfect, right?) and im glad i've stayed up too the wee hours in the morning, 7 hours before my last exam ever, to finish reading it. just wow. congratulations!

I LOVE THIS STORY!

only just read it all and me loves!

I am glad Gerard picked Frank in the store too. =]

*claps enthusiastically*AMAZING ENDING!

I was sitting at my 22nd birthday celebration dinner last night and all I could do was think about your story and how fabulous I thought the ending was. I dont think I mentioned in my previous post how much I fucking loved how the chapter with Frank's gift contained a complete recap of the entire story. Reading that chapter reminded me how much joy each individual chapter brought me and reminded me how much I loved each one so so much.
*High five* for recapping such an incredible story and for ending it with the "picture perfect, i dont want it". THATS the ending to one of the BEST Frerards ever.

AND I forgot to tell you how much I loved chapter 32!!! The Bernando thing KILLED me!!! HAHA I was rolling on the floor laughing at that and the little dust-bunny heaven thing. Freakin' brilliant.

Again, thanks for the beautiful story. :)
I'm so sad that its over but so excited that it ended so beautifully.

<3,
One of your story's biggest fans.

wee i finished reading and i must say this whole story kicked my ass, i loved everything!!! your a fabulous writer and i think ill read it again now lol

"And there they sat. It wasn’t perfect. It was two homosexual boys, naked in a bed together. "

i love how simple that line is, it made me laugh xD

-a

Aww Tonje.... *HUGS*

I'm soo sad that it's over, but soo happy with how you ended it. It was such a beautiful ending, I had tears in my eyes when I realized that was it. And I'd already had tears left over from the previous chapter, which I didnt get to read until today too (I'm such an awful person for not reading and commenting beforehand! I've been busy! Sorry!!) and let me tell you... I had tears streaming from how beautiful Gee's birthday present was. Fucking gorgeous, is what that chapter was.

And thanks for the chapter before where you gave me a shoutout. I enjoyed your story SO MUCH and commenting was the least I could do because I loved the chapters THAT MUCH. So, definately thank you for writing this beautiful and gorgeous awesome story!!! I'm soo sad that it's over - but I can still imagine Gerard and his "precious" the way you described them in the story and I'm happy with the picture you painted of them. It's beautiful. Their characters were truly gorgeous and yeah... just, thanks and congrats on such a fantastic story.

I looked forward to every single update and would get so excited when I would log in and see that you did update.

So again, thanks for the beautiful story.
It was, and still is, one of my favorites and always will be!

Love,
Liz :)

This story is so awsome!! :D

L!ZZ <3