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  • Ohh. It'sOnly Beccy.

    Ohh. It'sOnly Beccy. (100)

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    wow... this is amazing!
    I loved it.
    September 30th, 2009 at 07:11pm
  • Misc. Oranges

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    this is nice, but a bit sudden. you could have done maybe three chapters, like... staged it out over a couple of nights, built up the suspence, but still, nice.
    September 30th, 2009 at 03:39pm
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