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  • lucy4eva

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    AWHHHHHHH so sweet
    but so saddd :[
    *sniff.
    October 27th, 2009 at 11:12am
  • Crazysabby

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    awwww
    October 13th, 2009 at 03:20am
  • Dodger

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    ooo this is really good!
    It's going to be hard to compete with, well done :)
    I'm in the competition too but I haven't submitted mine yet...
    x
    October 5th, 2009 at 01:06pm
  • Echo Lawrence

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    This is very detailed. You described everything so simply but yet, not making it too plain. Writing this is Ana's POV could have added more emotion to it.

    I give your entry three and a half out of five dancing monkeys :cute
    September 30th, 2009 at 04:37pm
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