The Cloaked Madman - Comments

well done i liked the wording especcially.

That's interesting : D I wouldn't think that you'd call water the cloaked man : D Sometimes it does seem suspicious...or when you look underwater and it's a looooong way down to the bottom.
And thanks for the dedication :)

yes, we had to write our biggest fear
Thanks
yeah, I know it doesn't fit, but I'm usually a funny person and the whole story didn't match my personality, so I added it. If you can think of something else, I'll change it.

Did you have to write about a fear for your English class? Well, anyway, I found it quite interesting. The choice of words are good, but the last line: I think I will live in a desert when I grow up. irritates me for some reason. I guess I fell that it isn't needed of in "the wrong spot."