Hero - Comments

Aww, this was so sweet! It's so realistic; it's like you're looking into someone's life. Lovely job (:

I love your style of writing. It's very good.

I loved the way you could feel the love for her dad when you read this. And how the words flowed great together.

>: Love thisss. So sweet! Most of all, it seems realistic. Not like those, fairytale-cliche ones some other people make. :]

Very cute. (:

i loved it . i can always look to your stories to find inspiration .
i cried, no lie .
my dad's rlly old and i'm always terrified of him dying on me ..
it made me wanna call him . haha

This was really a great entry. I loved how much emotion you were able to portray in all of it, especially with how much she had looked up to her father. The way that she did trust Jack enough to make him stay even after she probably should have kicked him out really was... heartwarming (dare I say?). I sapped up a little at the end, which is a rareity, only making this piece feel all the better. Great job. :]