A Flashing of Eyes - Comments

Oh my god....
This is amazing.
I'm in love with your writing.

I realize you posted this a while ago, but I don't think it's fair to leave this story unnoticed.

Everything about this story is SO original, and its words are incredibly powerful. I don't really have many useful things to say besides "I really love your work and you should take pride in the talent that you possess as a word smtih."

why is this not sitting on a shelf in a bookstore yet? that mere fact is blasphemy.
the way you write is just. i dunno. it's like inhuman. O.O
that was like the most amazing story i have ever read. no lie.

*tear* awwww happy ending! yay!

Thanks for sticking with it you guys. I love you all =)

I'm working(ish) on a new story.

=o

Well I wish it wasn't over...

...but that may be the finest story ending I've ever seen. *applause*

I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.

This. Is. Amazing.

I loved the update, it was a really nice ending.

This is my favorite piece of yours :)

Dammit hannah!!!! im siting here in computer skills about ready to cry! That was great! and so SAD! god u need to write more. i will force you to write! MWA HA HA!!!

I've ever been concussed or anything, but the way you described it made it feel so real. Like as if it was me. It was just so amazing. Please update!
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Wow. That was really a terrifying chapter. You know how to build up suspense without being annoying. And your descriptions are still incredible.

Wow, i freaking love this. I've onl read up to chapter 3 but i LOVE it! it's so original and discriptive and dreamy...... *sigh..*

lol awesome.

You're too good at writing. You just...argh...

Curse you.

Oh, my.
I'm shaking, and I was the whole time while reading your story.
It was just so real, you captured the moment and everything exceptionally well.
It was an amazing update, and I NEED another one!
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Oh wow. This was just simply amazing.
You know that feeling in the pit of your stomach that you get when your scared? Well that's what I have right now after reading that chapter. I'm scared for both Skye and Ellie. That chapter was so amazing that it affected me. That's how powerful your story is. =]
I can't wait for more. Becuase I know that it will be really wonderful.
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:omfg: Stop scaring me so much. It's too awesome for words.

great piece! I love how real it feels. you should write stories more often hannah. this one is excellent. :)

Oh wow. I really can't get my head around it, It was just an absolutly amazing chapter. You captured all the emotions so well. It was so incredible, I've never read anything like your story and I'm never going to want to because Your story is so amazing nothing can ever compare. Your a really talented writer and I'm looking forward to another update!
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The next chapter will explain a lot. It's turning out a bit darker than I anticipated... ah well. I think there will be three more chapters.

O_o I wish to know more!!

Firstly, DECEPTIVE CADENCE!! XD Band. [/stupid]
I just love your writing. You take all those little feelings everyone is so familiar with and do the impossible: you put them into words. I can't wait for more.
And you are a fantastic story writer.