This is amazing sian its like so well written i hate reading your work sometimes because normally on mibba ill go "this is so bad why do you bother" But with yours i cant because it deserves a lot of praise , so ill leave you with my favourite comment Ive ever gotten...with better spelling of course
"hats of girl , you're really something with a pen"
"hats of girl , you're really something with a pen"
(: arbennig sian wir i ti.