This was incredibly dirty, and I felt sick reading it... but I loved it none-the-less. I think this is probably one of my favorite stories on mibba now (even though it's only a one-shot). Keep writing, because this is pretty damn amazing! :) :) :)
That was actually really good. At first I didn't think it would be, it was like absolutly amazing. Is it going to have more chapters? I'm going to subscribe.